Direction of my Paper

Earlier this week I had begun my paper and have written the first five and a half pages. When I came back to my paper last night and re-read it, I had gained some inspiration to the point where now I like my last two pages or so a lot. I feel like with the entire product I have avoided a bias through the use of positive words. This paper definitely goes against what I originally came into writing this thinking. While I am not sure if this was a smart tactic or not, I feel like I avoided bias over the course of the last two days by bringing up each side of the argument and then pointing out a flaw or two to each. This seemed to keep the paper balanced because neither side had an apparent edge over another.

In addition, I feel good about my paper because of my choice in presented information. Rather then going into an extensive history lesson for each side, I showed the rhetorical tactics of each side and gave a brief example of information they would use to support their given tactic. This doesn't mean that I avoided each sides argument, but I tried to stray away from using their line of rhetoric because it was flawed. This was shown through brining up the third side of the argument. Overall I like the way my paper is turning out on its final edits. I feel accomplished because I didn't slander one side over another.

Small Rhetoric at hand?

I was on youtube looking for what sort of popular reactions there are to the Macedonian controversy and I couldnt help but stumble upon some strong nationalistic videos. Rhetoric at play? I think so...

FYROM Macedonians protesting against Greece in 2008

Greek Macedonians protesting in Melbourne, Australia against FYROM in 2007

I am interested to see how these two sides will react to future resolutions. I know talk about FYROM joining the EU is coming up again; I wonder how those will turn out.

Reoccurring story in the news...

Today when I was about to get started on my research paper, I became distracted and of course logged onto Facebook first. While there, I stumbled across a story through a page I am subscribed to about the Macedonian issue.

http://www.google.com/hostednews/canadianpress/article/ALeqM5hHwdATCnuOr-rLsAEiYO-3oxSM_w?docId=6350311

After reading the article, it discussed the story I mentioned earlier. The country of F.Y.R.O.M is taking Greece to U.N. courts because of Greece's veto of FYROM into NATO. The previous story discussed the Macedonian side of the issue and this one brought in the newly released Greek side of the issue. One aspect of the article I found to be very interesting was the tid-bit about land takeover with time. One portion of the article states, "[The name Macedonia for FYROM] implies that at some point of the future they will have to be attached to that country". This quote and the concept behind it is interesting. It is a dynamic of the argument that I have not yet seen. Prior to this article, all the information about the land argument was simply, 'the name Macedonia implies land claims'; nothing has ever went into detail about it really. Overall this article was interesting and now I might try to find some scholarly work to back up the statements here for incorporation into my paper.

Today's Research

Today I began to formally create an outline for my controversy paper. As I began to write each paragraph in what will be consequential order, I began to match my current sources with each paragraph. I would ask myself, "which source should be used to address the topic of this paragraph"? As I was doing this, I began to refine my sources and eventually learned that some of the sources I have gotten previously aren't necessarily good for the paragraphs I had in mind. This fact caused me to look online some more for new sources and about after an hour of researching I stumbled upon a book which was absolutely fascinating!

This book that I found had been written solely to address the controversy that I was looking into. Originally when I was researching, I was looking up texts that contained ancient text used in current arguments to support the modern scholars arguments that I could have also used. My problem though was, without the ancient text, the scholar themselves would be basing their words off of mere opinion. This led me into looking at the works cited pages of these scholars and I found numerous scholarly works that they had indirectly cited. Looking into these, I found massive amounts of knowledge that I have not known before. Now I am thinking of getting rid of most my old sources and replacing them with newer ones I found tonight. Nevertheless I now must rethink how I was to structure my paper.

Controversy in the News

I was doing some research just right now and oddly enough I stumbled on a story in the news pertaining to my controversy. While the issue is just about 20 years old, it is still alive in the global spotlight as seen by this 7 hour old article.

http://www.google.com/hostednews/canadianpress/article/ALeqM5ghf7xZQvptuaxWGqM2ZNuhvsxi7Q?docId=6316544

The article is basically talking about how F.Y.R.O.M is taking Greece to international court over Greece's decision to block F.Y.R.O.M from joining NATO. Greece blocked their entry because of the remaining dispute over the Macedonian name. Until the issue is solved, Greece will also block F.Y.R.O.M's entry into the European Union.

Nevertheless, F.Y.R.O.M argues that the name dispute is being handled by the UN and that using that as a basis for vetoing NATO membership was not proper (in simple terms). Greece will release a counter argument Tuesday which should prove interesting and add to the swath of information on the controversy. While this story is not directly related to the immediate controversy (has to do with NATO), it still provides some good insight.

 

Change of Topic

After doing some extensive research on the destruction of ancient sites in Turkey, I have learned that this topic will not be possible. Many of the sources on the issue are popular and anything that is remotely academic is well off topic and/or very outdated. Because of this inconvenience I have chose to switch my topic to something that I know I will be able to find lots of research on and that is the controversy about Alexander the Great and Macedonia.

Since the 1990's, with the collapse of Yugoslavia, many new countries within the Balkans had formed. One of these countries is what is now known as the Republic of Macedonia, or more properly, the Former Yugoslavic Republic of Macedonia. Located right above historic Macedonia within Greece the similar names created dispute.

Looking at this map, the green marks Macedonia as a region in Greece. Right above that is F.Y.R.O.M which claims the same name. Greece see's this as a claim on their territory and without getting into too much detail the two countries are still in dispute. To add injury to insult, F.Y.R.O.M is also claiming that Alexander the Great (King of ancient Macedonia) is their main historical figure whereas Greece refutes this through historical proofs. The issue over Macedonia is two pronged; one over land/name and the other half over history/Alexander the Great ownership.

Research Dilemma

Byzantine Hagia Sophia

Earlier when I was researching for my potential controversy topic I stumbled into some road blocks. Thinking that there would be lots of information on my potential subject, I soon learned that there was not much of anything. What I thought would be good key terms such as "Turkey and Archeological decay", "Turkey and UNESCO danger list", and even "Denigration of antiquities in Turkey" ended up showing things that did not relate at all to my subject. I tried to be even more specific by searching specific places/things such as Allianoi, Hagia Sophia, or even the walls of Constantinople, but none of those turned up any results. The closest thing I have gotten to related information is archeological accounts but unfortunately those are not good enough. I will continue to search for academic sources but if nothing remotely close shows up, I might have to change my subject to something else such as the controversy of Alexander the Great.

Allianoi

Walls of Constantinople (Near Belgrade Gate)